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Each time my thoughts turn to you
my aching heart skips a beat.
No doubt the butterflies will come
each and every time we meet.

I've lost the feeling of having
my two feet on solid ground,
because when I'm thinking of you,
I have my head in the clouds.

My mind is so filled with wonder
but my heart has not a care
as long as I am with you
for all the time I can spare.

Life has never been so brilliant,
I have never felt this way...
Each time we have to say goodbye,
I so wish that you could stay.

You're never absent from my thoughts
and you're always in my dreams.
I think of where our lives might take us,
and hope that together, we'll always be.

I live to hear your voice each day,
and to see your smilig face.
I long to be inside your arms,
to find your warm embrace.

And even though I realize
that "together" could be hard,
I dream of the day it is "for ever"

...and I've dreamed it from the start.
©2006-2010 ~FearlessLove
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Author's Comments

I wrote this two years ago actually, but I decided to change the ending. I think this one fits better, before it was all about a "secret" love. I suppose in a way my love is still a secret, but it still didn't fit with the context of the poem... maybe I should write another one that fits it that way... Anyway, I altered this during class this morning. The meter is messed up somehow, it changes somewhere toward the middle, I think. Comments, if you please. Once again, it's for him.

(Edited October, 10, 2006)

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